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Date: Wed, 26 Jan 1994 13:25:08 EST
From: Mike Sander <344LWKC@CMUVM.CSV.CMICH.EDU>
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Subject: [BBD] Once Upon Returning Home
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[ADMIN: It's been a while, but it looks like things will become active again,
 thread wise.  Thanks goes out to Dan Peters, for writing a good share of
 this...]

SAQ: "I watched the ruins as the smoke cleared
      Once upon returning home
      A touch of sadness but no fear
      Once upon returning home
      I don't know what I cried about
      But reality removed all doubt
      I was warm but all alone
      Once upon returning home...
      Returning home" - _Returning Home_, Sammy Hagar

When Bekdatusi Bennison Dranzotten arrived at his headquarters deep in
Low City, it was still well before dawn.  The place had changed since he
was last there in body, but this was no surprise.  He had observed much
while wandering around in incorporeal form, and he was thus well aware of
the condition of his former organization.

Most of his servants had left, and both his headquarters and his outposts
had been rather neglected.  But at least -- probably thanks to his magical
defenses -- the buildings had been untouched by the recent meteorite.  And
getting his servants back was also little problem -- they still wore their
bracelets, and he could call them all back, and quickly return matters to
their former state.  It was the obvious thing to do.

Too obvious, perhaps.  Velric clearly wanted him to do exactly that.

Bek smiled to himself.  Velric was getting overconfident if he thought that
Bek would have any real difficulty in freeing himself from the necromancer's
control.  Velric himself had demonstrated the fact that the bracelets had
limitations.  And, having created them, BBD knew exactly where those faults
were, and how to manipulate them.

Of course, Velric would know immediately if the bracelet were removed,
unless precautions were taken.  The best move would be, he thought, to trick
Velric somehow into thinking the control was maintained, just as Velric had
done when the control went in the other direction.

At the same time, BBD wanted to get back to Velric's headquarters, for another
shot at the DarkSeed.  But if the necromancer had learned anything from his
time as servant, he would demand a good reason for such an intrusion.  And
only a high measure of success, or of failure, would provide such a reason.

Since either goal would take time, BBD felt he might as well rebuild his
empire.  Getting a healthy supply of money, and maybe adding some property
to his holdings would ease some of his pains, not to mention allowing him
further control over things in Generica.

After all, even during his "absence", BBD had seen a few would-be overtakers
try to rely on power, and fail.  Bek laughed at this: if magical power was
the only factor, why was a merchant like Melwiss in charge?  The reason, BBD
felt, was that Melwiss had not only the intelligence and ability for the job,
but a large amount of loyalty and popularity behind him.  Bek felt he easily
qualified as far as the first two items, and the bracelets insured him the
latter two, albeit in a way some found objectionable.

Turning his attention back to the present, Bek did a quick mental survey of
his servants.  Most had tried to return to whatever lives they had led before
being trapped by him, with varying degrees of success.  A quick series of
commands, and they were all irrestibly on their way back.

<Interesting.> he thought to himself.  <Myrnien is still at her outpost.
Fine then, she can start the process of collecting overdue payments from
my clients.>

*Wake up, Myrnien.*  <Strange, her primary thought is that she is irritated
to be taken out of her dreams.  What could that signify.  Here's another
surprise: she's somehow pleased that I've returned.  Ah, I see.  She thought
I was dead, and was disappointed that she hadn't killed me herself.>  *Lovely
to be missed so, my dear.  I have a job for you -- collecting rent, and
reestablishing my contacts.  I'm sure you'll do fine, although I'll be keeping
an eye on you now and again.  And, have fun!* he added the last with a mocking
tone.

* * * *

As soon as BBD had finished speaking, Myrnien's body was already involuntarily
responding to the command.  For far from the first time she cursed BBD, and
vowed revenge.

* * * *

"Would you cut that out?" Trevu demanded.  "You're making me nervous."

"Sorry." Yaxan replied rather sheepishly.

They began to walk again.  Nothing happened for a few minutes.  Yaxan looked
up again, and Trevu reflexively followed his glance.  There was nothing
unusual in the sky above them.

"Why do you keep doing that?"  Trevu asked, exasperated.  The two were
supposed to be heading to a meeting, and he was growing increasingly tired of
Yaxan's fixation with the job of finding this "Myrnien".

"I was thinking of climbing that building, to look around." Yaxan answered.

"You know you can't do that!  We've got work to do."

"I know, but you can probably handle the messengers yourself, and if there's
any trouble, I won't be far away."

"You'll never find her that way anyway."

"But you don't _know_ that.  There's always a chance, and it's so little
trouble...."

"It's a lot of trouble if Mozi gets angry at us." Trevu interrupted.

"Why would she?" Yaxan asked.

"Two guys are coming to meet us, so there's two of us.  It's that simple.
If there's only me, they'll think that we think that we're twice as
important as they are.  That'll mess up the negotiations."

"As far as I'm concerned, we _are_ twice as important.  They're lucky we're
meeting them at all.  I say they only deserve one messenger."

"And I say we just follow orders.  We're not paid to improvise."

"I'd be dead by now if I didn't improvise at Renezio's place."

"So quit while you're ahead.  Mozi said you did well to get half in advance,
but she also said that looking for the bracelet people is a lower priority
than this.  Especially considering the lack of success we've had so far."

Yaxan paid no heed to the discouraging words.  "I'll just go up for a few
minutes.  I'll be able to see if the messengers are coming, and I'll be
down before they can reach you."

"This is just plain _stupid_.  You don't find people by just climbing a
building and looking around.  You have to talk to innkeepers, shopkeepers,
and so on.  You have to give them money to improve their memory.  Anyway,
if you insist on trying the stupid way, you should go where things are
really busy.  There's a lot fewer people around here."

"There's always a chance." Yaxan repeated.  "Besides, I did a luck spell
this morning."

"And since when did you become the least bit talented in magic?" Trevu
mocked sarcastically.  "Luck spell indeed.  Don't you know that you make
your own luck?"

However, what Trevu didn't know about was the power of magic.  Particularly
in a town like Generica, where strange things happened everyday.  And
especially when this spell had support, from being outside Generica, ones
who wished to see such a meeting as much as Yaxan, and who lent their own
power towards it.

"Why are you staring like that?" Trevu demanded, suddenly noticing that Yaxan
was fixated on something again.

"I think I see her." he replied, and took off after the figure he'd seen.

"Mozi's gonna kill us, you idiot." Trevu hissed, but Yaxan was already gone.
He cursed, then continued onto the meeting place -- he might as well try to
make the best of that situation, rather than have them both go after what
was probably a hopeless chase.

As Yaxan neared the point he thought he'd seen Myrnien, part of his mind
tried to convince him that he'd been mistaken.  But he didn't listen to
that, determined to continue after the girl.  But as he came closer, he
realized why the warning had come: the woman he was following had similar
facial features to Myrnien's, but her skin wasn't quite the same color, and
the clothing didn't match at all.  Disheartened, Yaxan was tempted for a
moment to return to the meeting place.  But first, he decided to scale the
nearest building, while there was no one to argue against it.

Reaching the top, he quickly scanned the area.  The front of the building
jutted out conveniently into the street which it faced, such that Yaxan
could see a fair distance along the street in two directions.  To the
north, he could see a small marketplace; the morning's first wave of
customers was just arriving.  None of the people there were wearing blue
bracelets.  Beyond that there was nothing.  He looked to the south, just
in time to see Trevu turn into the street that would lead toward the
meeting place.  The street was still nearly empty in that direction.  In
all other directions, buildings obscured most of his view of the ground.

He might as well watch the people at the marketplace for awhile, he thought.
Maybe something would turn up.  He started to do so, but then he found that
his gaze had been diverted eastward, to a house less than half a mile away.
Which was strange, considering he could find nothing remarkable about the
house.  The door was well above ground level; Yaxan could see the top few
steps of the external staircase which led to it.  He turned back to the
market, only to find himself again staring at the door to the east.

He nearly turned away reflexively, then blinked, wondering if his mind was
playing tricks on him.  He could clearly see the back of a woman with
nearly black, curly hair, dressed in mail, standing at the door.  Her hand
was resting on a sword at her side, and there was definitely something
blue on her wrist.

He climbed down the side of the building dangerously quickly.

* * * *

Myrnien felt the presence of strange eyes on her, which was almost expected.
After all, anyone walking through Low City with money on them was an obvious
target.  Usually though, the combination of the sword at her side and her
quick stride kept would-be thieves away.  And, even though Myrnien no longer
wore her usual weapon -- that had been left behind the last time she had seen
her beloved brother Kaalzic -- such was the case today.  She breathed a small
sigh of relief at that.

This brought a peal of laughter from BBD, along the line of communication the
bracelet afforded.  He communicated something to her about how she needn't
fear these "peasants", which she ignored as equally as anything other than a
command.  All she cared about was that the job was almost finished, and soon
she could have another attempt to free herself.  Coming to the next place
BBD owned, she gave a firm knock on the door.

* * * *

'I was _right_ -- that's her.' Yaxan thought to himself, comparing the
picture Kaalzic had given him to the person before him.  She looked older
than in the picture, but there could be no doubt.  'Finally I found her!
This'll teach Trevu to mock my magic, or my instincts!  Now all I have to do
is find out where she lives, and report that back to Kaalzic.  The money I
get there should more than offset any losses in negotation.  If I'm lucky, I
might even get a little advancement because of this!!!'.  Seeing Myrnien
take off again, Yaxan followed, sticking to the shadows.

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