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From: hutch@ibeam.jf.intel.com (Steve Hutchison)
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Subject: [ADMIN] Writing Other People's Chars   was re: another newbie...
Date: 15 Dec 1994 17:19:07 -0000
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I've added the ADMIN header so people can tell this isn't a story
thread.  It's a good idea to do that with discussions.

Liana writes:
>      I don't *know* the official policy, but I don't like my characters 
> doing things that I don't think they'd do.  And how can anyone else know 
> what I've got in mind when I write about this character I've created?  
> *Especially* when I've given very little information about her.

The official policy was posted from the faq a few days ago, but it
basically is, don't write what other characters are doing and post
it without permission from their owners.

The method used by those of us who are collaborating in writing is
to use email -- if you are interacting with someone, you can write
very short segments (which is a drag if you want to have things get
done in less than years, or put in details, because the lag between
posting and the other people getting the post can be as much as 3 weeks,
in some cases.  Normally it's about 2-4 days, which is not fun.)
This is a lot like the way they do it on alt.dragons-inn (for which
see discussion below). 

Or, you can go ahead and write what you think the general storyline
would be, write dialogue and so forth for the other characters, and
then email it to the other writer(s) so they can fix the places where
their character appears.  This can be a LOT of fun.  You don't have
to put in the complete interactions, you can end up changing the flow
of the story that was sent to you, all sorts of things like that, but
you have to be willing to let other people TOUCH your story.  If that
isn't something you want to do then you need to write just solo bits,
and that can be fine too, but it's a LOT of fun doing the other kind
of writing too.

As for the issues of characters being written "strangely" by other
people who don't understand them -- yes, this is EXACTLY why the custom
arose of emailing posts for acceptance by owners of other characters who
appear.  This means, when someone says NO, you don't post until you
can either fix the post (usually they'll write their bit) or until you
can remove the section with their character in it -- which may mess up
your story.  Them's the risks of collaborating though, and I've seen
it happen maybe once or twice in two+ years.

>      Well, I'm not a role-player--I'm a writer.  There's a difference.  I 
> have never played a role-playing game; I know nothing of role-playing 
> etiquette.  I only know what I write.
>      And besides, I came here after spending almost a year over on a.d-i, 
> where we tend to do things a little differently.  So I guess I'm bringing 
> a bit of a bias here, too.  

This is interesting.  Since there wasn't really any discussion on the
alt.config group when Dave Womack revived the alt.dragons-inn group,
the newgroup didn't get honored in a lot of places.  When the group
alt.pub.cloven-shield was created it was supposed to supercede alt.d-i
and alt.dragons-inn was linked or aliased to cloven-shield.  That all
happened before Womack found alt.dragons-inn and re-newgrouped it.

I recently referred to it as a "ghost" -- this offended Dave, for
which I should be sorry, but that was my understanding, since it
doesn't exist on my main news machine.  I had to go hunting on some
other newsfeeds before I found it.  Anyway, it's quite lively, and
it has the same sort of "feel" that alt.pub.dragons-inn had when it
first formed.  

>      My characters are my own personal creations.  They're all a part of 
> me, in some way or another. So how can I allow someone else to just jump 
> in and alter what is part of me?  My thoughts and my feelings are tied up 
> in these characters, and I *don't* like others telling me what to think and 
> feel.
>      And before you say that I'm a bit too possessive, or that I'm too 
> involved with my characters...  I'm a writer.  I plan to do this for a 
> living once I graduate.  

OK -- this I have to reply to.  I'm trying (after too many years) to get
published.  I've been frequenting the "writer" forums at several SF
conventions recently, talking to editors, etc.  I do not intend to stomp
on your dreams.  This is not saying "don't write" because you will waste
a LOT of time if you don't write.  But make sure you have other skills
or that you will be able to get into some other career at the same time,
because writing will not pay the bills.  There are thousands of members of
the SF Writers Association of America.  There are maybe ten who are able
to make a living only from their writing.  Most of these got their start
under different market and publishing circumstances than exist now.  You
will have to work your way up to the point where you can support yourself
on your writing.  So, make sure you can get a day job, one that you can
live with, because you'll need it, at least for a while.

Also, you're going to have to learn to "let go" of your characters and
your stories.  Yes, this is a good place to practice that.  In the real
world there are these critters called "editors" who absolutely get in
the way of you ever being published, if you can't work with them.  You
will have to be able to tear out scenes you sweated blood over, you will
have to deal with them saying really stupid things and realize that they
are your reader and if they think your character was doing something
weird, then you better re-examine that section.  You're going to have
to be able to defend yourself from them too.

And the collaborative writing style that happens here can let you learn
how to do that but you have to be willing to let other people rewrite
sections of your prose, tweak your dialogue, and put words and actions
onto YOUR characters.  I've got several characters here who reflect some
part of my personality, or what I wish my personality was like (grin) and
I don't like it when people mess them up.  I had to figure out how to
write with people who didn't know the "voice" or the way that some of
my characters would act.

Oh yeah -- not every character should be a reflection of some deeply
treasured part of yourself.  I totally despise Archmage Thorn, who
I didn't create but who I have written more than most other folks, so
I'm stuck with "defining" him when people ask.

Hutch

